2008年4月28日月曜日

Paragraph writing exercise 1

Nakasone,Ayaka
ARW-AF
Chris Hoskins
Paragraph 1
Why should high school students participate in club activity?
Participation in club activities develops high school students physically andmentally.First, from
physical point of view, it makes them active and builds up strong bodies.For example, when I
was a high school student, I belomg to a badminton club.So, I trained my body and built stamina.
It was also very useful for the life of a student preparing for an entrance exam. Like this, in
another situation, it's very helpful that we gain strength through club activities.
Second,from a mental point of view, to achieve our own goals we try to do our best and to work
positively.This attitude will be needed everywhere we live life. Finallly, we can also develop
socially.In club activities we need to cooperate with our teammates. We must think about not only ourselves, but also others. It seems to be difficult, but if we can, we can be best friends.
As we can see above, to participate in club activities helps us mature as a person. Students can learn a lot of things from these activities.

1 件のコメント:

Yusuke さんのコメント...

Well you spelt "Finallly" take one 'l' out. Overall the paragraoh is very interesting.